English Essay

Ugh. Argh. Eh. Got my score for my first big English Report. 140 out of 150. While it is still an A - I'm a bit disappointed by the comments which don't seem all that bad, but I hate thinking I left important information out. I compared Little Red Riding Hood to Lon Po Po (Little Red Riding Hood from China,) and after telling me that it was a good comparative, "it may be worthwhile to explore cultural differences". I only had a thousand words to work with, and it was hard to keep it that short. Bummer dude, I was keeping my report just about the literature - next essay I will have to remember to step outside the box. :)